The Bucket Drummer

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The bucket drummer
plays the same beat every night
which I notice as I walk by
the corner of 42nd and Broadway
hearing his plastic rim shots
and salad bowl pings
ricochet off the billboards
like rhythm shrapnel

played at the same tempo too
an optimal groove
showing off his handiwork
keeping our attention aloft
out-noising the noise

but the thing about the beat
that cuts through consciousness
is its sameness
which reminds you how here you are too
walking by this corner again
and again and again
listening and expecting
some variation
without thinking anything new.


25 responses to “The Bucket Drummer”

  1. Eklavya Singh Avatar
    Eklavya Singh

    nice

  2. Transported me right back to Montreal where there are some wonderfully profound bucket drummers as well. Thank you!

  3. I like how the layout of the poem lends a beat to the message and flow.

  4. Nice poem..I loved reading it..

  5. True reflection of our lives today. Doing same things every day, with no variations. What a life. I hate routines.

  6. ‘Ricochet off the billboards’ … nice! Lovely poem I can hear the beat through your words.

  7. libertysfreedomblog Avatar
    libertysfreedomblog

    This is so good!!!

  8. Peppermint Sweets Avatar
    Peppermint Sweets

    Thought provoking

  9. Really interesting. The reassurance sameness and routine brings, staying comfortable never getting better. Thank you for the poem.

  10. Lots of nice lines. Here’s one of my favorites: “out-noising the noise.”

  11. maguie papanmi Avatar
    maguie papanmi

    Good poem i like it , if your own this is great 😉

  12. Soft and Intense, Shallow and deep, depicts a writer’s block perfectly! I love this.

  13. how fantastic – i can feel, and hear, the beat!

  14. Reblogged this on Sincerely Yours and commented:
    I really enjoyed reading this. keep them coming

  15. Really love the layout..
    Reminds me of something

  16. love the shrapnel imagery, rad stuff!

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